Thursday, 6 February 2014

Rough Cut 2 Feedback

In a previous lesson after we had continued with editing and adding titles, we showed are fellow peers again of what we had done so that they could see if we took on board their comments from the previous time. Yet again we got feedback on what we did well and things that we could have improved on. 

Two of our fellow peers Chantelle and Joyce  both confirmed that they liked  the title effects that was used when showing the names of who they were in order of importance and the way that it was displayed. It wasn't just anywhere it was well executed and thought of. The way it was positioned was very good as well, as it wasn't a distraction to what was actually going on whilst the actors were acting. They also said they enjoyed the handheld camera effect that was used throughout, it wasnt just put anywhere just to fill up uneccessary space. It was done well enough to be put in places that it needed to be, adding effect helping build that suspense that they could see. the handheld camera effect also wasn't a continious thing it only used when needed creating a good effect that would intrigue the target audience. 

An improvement that was given was that at the beginning of the film there was a bright flash straight after showing the director, it looked slightly odd and that it could be changed to a different transition just so that it flows better. Especially as it doesn't look like a transition you would normally see in a horror film.

However another peer named Luke had said that he liked the transaction that was used and the way it looked because in his personal view it did look fluent between the two. 

Click here to view my second rough cut

1 comment:

  1. Your choice of linking the actor credits to characters on screen works. Think about the animation of your production company name - is it necessary or appropriate for genre? Make sure Sephora's last name appears in the 'shadow' title as well. Check your film for continuity - at the moment the camera gets set down twice without being picked up in between.

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